Very nice. My internal image machine was well fed! "Fish mouth,""forehead bellows," "cheeks like a spaniel," "short squat smelling machine..." Mom's wine evaluations were hilarious. I loved the phrase, "she was rudely interrupted by herself." You are a funny writer! Thank you.
What a GREAT story! So well written. The expressions! There were three typos I found, and you might want to fix them. (Nothing serious, mind you.) But this was such a pleasure to read. You have a great voice. I was drawn into the characters of both women. Enjoyable!
Glad the short stories are back. This one was hilarious.
I’ve been waiting for new fiction! This did not disappoint. 🥰
I loved all the cheeky Roald Dahl references!!!
Amazing ! I laughed out loud ! Reading this to my children tonight
Very nice. My internal image machine was well fed! "Fish mouth,""forehead bellows," "cheeks like a spaniel," "short squat smelling machine..." Mom's wine evaluations were hilarious. I loved the phrase, "she was rudely interrupted by herself." You are a funny writer! Thank you.
So good, Shifra!! Loved reading this on my lunch break today.
What a GREAT story! So well written. The expressions! There were three typos I found, and you might want to fix them. (Nothing serious, mind you.) But this was such a pleasure to read. You have a great voice. I was drawn into the characters of both women. Enjoyable!